My opinion of the last story

I hope you liked my latest story (two blogs put together to make a story).  As you could hopefully see, it was based on Hannie's point of view.  Believe me, I hope the writing actually paid off! The night I finished it, I had a really bad dream!  I'm quite sure that there could be a cave like Bani Tootia out in the world.  Oh, by the way, it's pronounced Bah-nee Too-sha.  Now I think you might want to hear about It.  If I could name It, I would  probably call it Gafi.  It might have come from the planet Pasewrtyughiffydonbud, the planet that the dragons came from.  Gafi would be very poor, in the dragons' grand kingdom of Halleluiah.  In Bani Tootia, Gafi wants payback for the poor treatment it recieved!  On the other side, here are some parts that you might not have understood.  #1:  When the cave goes black, it's acually Hannie being knocked out when the canoe tips over and bangs her on the head.  #2:  You might wonder why people are hypnotized and why some never come up. I think Gafi would have special Its to help It hypnotize people and get them out of the way.  That way, the path to the dragons might be clearer and Its revenge might be closer!  #3:  You might want to know if Gafi's workers were related to It. Answer: I DON'T KNOW!!! Use your imagination. The workers can be whoever you want.  Tootleoo!